Saturday, 18 November 2017
Saturday, 12 August 2017
Winter Poems
Huge waves pouring water onto the skin coloured sand.
Flaming droplets bursting on the rocky concrete.
Striking the webs off a hairy spider.
Frozen pools struck by a thunder storm.
Frozen ice flashing on the delicate branch.
Brooke
Storms
Waves crashing onto the sand.
Tornadoes swirling in the clouds.
Rough weather making massive floods.
Storms destroying the massive city.
Frozen ice on car windows.
Lateisha
It was a cold and chilly storm and the sky was so black.
I heard a noise like a storm was coming to me.
I could feel the heavy wind on my face.
I could not see because the fog was everywhere.
I felt so scared.
Ridhi
Storms
Storms are dark.
Storms rain like coins falling
out of a man’s pocket.
Storms flash lightning
like a torch light.
Storms are cold
like ice.
Jericho
Winter
Iced rain thunders on my dusty roof, while I’m below snoring away loudly.
Fearful thunder grabs houses one by one in his large bolty hands.
Frost bitten snow blasts on my outside walls.
Murky high-wind whispers with it’s lips.
Storms peering in windows trying to find a good victim with his blue eyes.
Apprehensive about death from the angrily chattering typhoon.
Hurricanes madly flooding cities.
Gales hitting my car.
Joel
A tornado flashing his eyes at me, throwing huge buildings at me.
Thunder striking terror through cars, small buildings and large trucks.
Rain spitting water in my face waiting for hail to fall.
Zak
Rain and wind blowing sand like tornadoes.
Thunder makes a loud noise, the loud noise frightens me.
High winds make the footpath slippery.
Jenny
Storms rage.
Loud thunder is coming.
Very bright lightning blinds you.
Lightning has a deadly sound.
Stormy, cloudy, lightning will shock you.
Waterfalls flood and get tazzered.
Avalanches have a deafening sound.
Max
Weather
Foggy tornadoes
Hurricanes cyclones tsunamis
Scared terrifying hungry nervous
Fine
Emil
Wednesday, 22 March 2017
Tuesday, 14 March 2017
Written Language
First she woke up early, she dashed down like a hurricane. Suddenly she saw that the brown dusty rope was untangled, by her amazing intelligence she knew her pet was gone. The girl became very disappointed and upset with tears dripping down. So she created giraffe posters, they said ‘she looks like she’s 3.5 metres tall and she has dark brown patches all over her. She has grey hooves and her neck is 2.5 metres long. Then she knocked on the Burn’s door he opened it up and he didn’t say anything about the giraffe. She went to sit down on the seat then behind her raised up a giraffe and they walked home.
Joel
One morning I went rushing down the steep greasy stairs and I jumped outside to play with my furry pet. I went to go and look and it wasn’t there. I felt disappointed and lonely without my best buddy. I went searching for my best buddy but he was nowhere to be found. I went looking in the park but he was not there. Then in a minute I looked behind me and found him. I felt surprised. My pet giraffe has sharp horns and bendy legs. On its body it has white strips. On its face it has a round mouth with long ears.
Brooke
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