WALT: paint pictures with
words.
Some of us are learning to
write two ideas in one sentence, in our poems.
The sun looks like a brand new
shiny rose, like the bubbling, boiling lava,
The sun looks like a giant in
the sky throwing bombs, like a cloud booming out lightning.
The sun tastes like hot wasabi,
like the ginger in the sushi shop.
The sun smells like burning
fire, like roasting marshmallows.
By Fiona
The
Sun
The sun is like fire dragon.
It feels like lava bursting out
with hot water.
The sun tastes like a fireball
going into your mouth.
The sun sounds like a gun
shooting at a target.
The sun smells like wood
burning in the fire!
By Peter Li
The
Ocean
The ocean smells like an
enormous jellyfish swimming in the sea.
The ocean sounds like a roaring
lion in the sea calling for help.
The ocean smells like salty
water, like a feather tickling my face.
It feels like snow full of salt
water on my tongue.
By Mikana
Trees
Trees look like rows of
soldiers marching.
Trees sound like the hissing of
the snake.
Trees smell like the fresh
apple I eat.
Trees look happy.
By William Whaea Teupoko
Thunder
Thunder looks like a giant
up-side down birthday hat, a gigantic pencil digging into the ground.
Thunder sounds like a racing
car driving very fast.
Thunder smells like socks with
jam, custard with yoghurt and bananas with eggs.
Thunder feels like the heavy
wind in the sky.
Thunder tastes like mud with
sticks, cardboard with paint and wood with a brain.
Thunder makes danger!
By Aroush
Snow
Snow is like a teardrop landing
in water.
Snow sounds like a silent
library, and smells like fresh ice cubes after rain.
Snow feels like rain drizzling
on your house.
By Aaria.
Thunder
Thunder is like your dad
slamming the hammer when he’s building a tree-house for you.
Thunder sounds like when you
scream in the car.
Thunder sounds looks like white
lightning flashing for a second,
Thunder feels like aflame of
burning lava.
Thunder sounds like a gun shot,
like a person puffing.
Thunder looks like danger in
the sky.
By TJ.
The
Clouds
The clouds look like some
squishy marshmallows in the freezing cold air and flashing wind.
Clouds
sound like a soft howling angry wolf.
Clouds sound like baby sleeping
in its bed while her mum rocks her to sleep.
By Anjalee
The
Sun
The sun is like a volcano
exploding out fire and lava.
It is like a bursting fireball
in the red, hot sky.
The sun sounds like tiny little
birds screaming for help.
The sun sounds like smoked
sausages on the bbq.
The sun smells like burning
smoke in a tree house.
The sun feels like a squishy
ball to play with.
By Maria
The
Sun
The sun is like a shiny fiery
ball, like lava that pops out of a volcano.
The sun feels like a hot ball
of bubbling skin.
By Patress
The
Sun
The sun looks like a fire in
the sky, hot like a fireball coming to destroy the city.
The sun can make our eyes hurt,
and roast the chicken to eat.
The sun makes me burn like
lava, and can burn paper.
By Tale
The
Sun
The sun is like a boiling
volcano that is shooting out lava.
The sun smells like a sausage
sizzling on a bbq.
The sun feels like a hot, hot
pizza.
By Brooke.
Thunder
Thunder makes a lot of noise
like a giant clapping his hands.
By Arian
The
Sun
The sun is like a humongous
cheese ball, and boiling lava.
The sun feels like sweat,
trickling down my face.
The sun feels like a terrible
rose sting, lava bubbling and boiling me to death.
The sun smells like burning
sausages, crunching me down with fire.
By Bayleigh
The
ocean
The ocean looks like a giant
blue fish sleeping, or a blue giant reading a book.
The ocean sounds like a
sizzling sausage and a boat burning by.
The ocean smells like a heart
made of salt water.
The ocean feels like a lizard’s
tongue or a dragon’s feathers.
By Cynthia
Snow
Snow looks like a puffy
marshmallow cloud, like a ghost flying around.
When the snow falls on the
ground it sounds like people crunching yummy food.
By Amy
Snow
Snow is like a huge fluffy
cloud and like shiny diamonds.
The snow is banging and
crunching when I walked on it.
Rain
Rain is like a flying angel
Rain feels like a huge, fluffy
ice cream.
Rain smells like bubbling cold
water and sounds like popping candy.
By Jooa
The Sun
The sun is like an enormous hot
ball of lava falling from the high sky.
The sun feels like a boiling
oven on my head.
The sun smells like hot
sizzling sausages on a boiling bbq, a hot bomb shooting down from space.
The sun is like a boiling lava
wave from the sea.
By Scarlett
Thunder
Thunder looks like a white
could, changing to a dark cloud when it is angry or sad.
Thunder sounds like a tornado
destroying stuff or a motorbike going round in circles.
Thunder smells like fresh new
water dripping down.
Thunder feels like very cold
water in the winter, when rain and snow is dropping.
By Baxter
The Sun
The sun feels like a hot bbq on
my skin, roasting me.
The sun is like a fireball
bursting in the sky.
By Kendall
Excitement
Excitement looks like when I
have a birthday and my parents surprise me.
Excitement feels like when I am
blindfolded and I’m touching something.
Excitement is like when there’s
a smell that smells so good and you don’t know what it is.
Excitement is like when I hear
my parents talking about something that is happening.
By Xiaolin
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